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Chapter Four
4 reviewsOnce more, the plot creeps forward, sneaking up behind you to... oh. Uhm, stuff happens, and it's, like, cool and stuff.
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Bubblegum Boy
(#) Karelon 2006-12-23
A pleasure to read. I do look forward to you continuing the tales of Skysaber.Bubblegum Boy
(#) dogbertcarroll 2007-04-10
snicker
Poor Dex. I wonder if her sense of humor
will get worse now. She has all new ways to
screw with Jared now!
I almost expexted to find out that the
Boomer tech was from a skynet drone at
one point. Excellent work.Bubblegum Boy
(#) tungsten 2007-04-11
I am very much enjoying this story at this juncture, although personally I would find it slightly easier on the eyes if you spaced out the text more. That however is a minor concen and in no way detracted from my enjoyment in reading the story.
I first came across your work some years ago on ff.net, with just enough time to read several chapters of eva revolutions before you removed the stories from that site. As I was fairly new to fanfiction at that point, it was over a year before I found your work archived at another site, but I was releived to do so. Your writing style is impeccable, and your characters, despite, or perhaps beacause of, being such absolute gary-stue's (at least in the case of skysaber) are both likeable and comprehensible.
I am beyond pleased that you have returned to writing (belated congratulations, I know) and I know that I am not alone in this.
As I final point, and I realise that this is none of my business, and you should have no compulsion whatsoever to answer this, I was interested to know exactly what was said years ago to make you abandon ff.net as suddenly as you did. I apologise for my presumption in asking. Please ignore this request before taking offense at it.
Once again, Thank You for writing again.
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