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Five Twenty-Four

by TamerTerra 2 Reviews

1500 years ago the Yin and Yang forces - Heylin and Elemental - were balanced. Why aren't they now? Blame those pesky Apprentices! Chase/Wuya/Dashi triangle implied.

Category: Xiaolin Showdown - Rating: G - Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy - Characters: Chase Young, Dashi, Wuya - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2005/08/04 - Updated: 2005/08/04 - 563 words

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  • Five Twenty-Four

    (#) Katriana 2006-03-19 01:15:31 PM

    An interesting idea, if not entirely canon to the best of my knowledge.
    You could use a good deal of improvement on basic english skills, but this is at least readable. You can spend a little more time on descriptives to just to give it a bit more of a sense of realness. I would have had a bit less confusion if you had mentioned who was which dragon only once or twice and then refered to the characters by their names.

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