'And I was forced to chose how she would die.' Julius thought to himself.
So the new part's good. I'm not big on the telepathy thing but none the less it's creative and it works. Kinda wished the new part was longer, I was into it. You show emotion well and that's the key. Well done. Update when you have the time. We're all waiting.
Did you deleted your story earlier? ANYWYAS, really good. Is your friends alright? You have my e-mail if you need to talk. rates exciting Please update soon!
oooh... siting. can't wait for more! btw watch your to/too and no/know
no offense but I found it bor-ing!
Can't wait till yew apdate xD
Wow. Interesting idea. Update soon!
It's so exciting! Update as soon as possible. :D
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