(#) figilio_vampiri 2008-12-10Well, I have to be the rain now... sorry.
I did like it, actually I loved the idea of each cut representing a flaw, but then with the party introduction I thought it lost some magic. I think it's good, but it could be improved you know? Almost like it's a cake that's been baked but it needs another five minutes in the oven and then lots of pretty decorations to make it your true awesome magicness!
(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-04-30Why?!? Why must it be so sad??? It's like if he hadn't died then, he wouldn't have lasted much longer... You now owe mea new box of tissues -.- I used up my last one crying like a motherfucker. Loved the way that you described the cutting and misery and emotions.
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