- I'm not a big fan of deaths but I did make two so... I was wondering why it wasn't making me cry coz usually I'm a water fountain when it comes to these, but the last sentence I was bawling my eyes out! So beautiful! It was a great story! Congratulations
Author's responseThank you. Last sentence, last sentence. Oh you mean the last thing that Archie said? "I'll never find another you"? That the one you're talking about?
(#) twiinklestar 2006-12-26NOOO ATLANTA!!! Bwaahhhhaha that was so sad. Continue I wanna be with you please. Thats my favorite story. COntinue it! Poor Atlanta she died and didn't even get to tell Archie she loved him. Oh my gosh I hate you! You made me cry and you made Archie sad! Bwaaaahhhh. Ill get over it. So good!
Author's responseOnly a few people want me to continue "I Wanna Be With You". But I need more votes peoplez!! Ya I can be mean sometimes. Mm hm alot of people cried. I told you didn't I?
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