And, there are those preposterous butterflies in his stomach, and, even if he isn't thirteen, he certainly feels like it as he looks into those dark eyes of hers.
(#) kristina1 2006-12-31 12:20:46 PM
(#) rori795 2006-12-31 01:05:46 PM
amazing update. such a cute chapter. i even snuck onto the computer at work to read it. lol. keep it up.
^___________^ Thank you so much!! Oh, I'm flattered and glad I could entertain you at work!
Okay, I'm officially in love with this story. Plllleaaasssee post again! The whole thing is just amazing. I love your writing style and how much effort you take to put in technical things that would honestly happen theatrically and when filming. Awesome!
Eeeeeeeee! Thank you so, so, so much! I took 'videography' when I was in middle school, so, I suppose that plays a bit role in my writing. SO glad you enjoyed it.
(#) KatieLove 2006-12-31 05:28:58 PM
I really love this. I especially love the vocabulary. :-)
Ah, thank you! Hehe, well, it's the English teacher in my blood, I think.
(#) sing4me09 2007-01-01 04:52:17 PM
that's how you do it Ryan!
Booyah! LOL. Thanks for reviewing!
(#) smilin_tj 2007-01-06 08:09:58 PM
oh wow. you write so well. i love this story. makes me feel all warm and fuzzy haha. im hanging on the edge of my seat
Aw! Thank you so so much and thanks, also, for reviewing faithfully!