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by doc 2 Reviews

He reminded him of dying things.

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters: Cloud Strife, Tifa Lockhart, Vincent Valentine - Published: 2006/12/31 - Updated: 2006/12/31 - 792 words - Complete


  • Rotten

    (#) aya1412 2007-01-11 11:40:39 PM

    Well done. I think Vincents opinions are out of character, but that's just me. Either way, the fic was written well. In particular, I liked your writing style and your choice of imagery.

    Author's response

    yes, i suppose that vincent would be considered ooc by fanon standards (i tend not to follow this, but to each his own). which is why, to be on the safe side, i stated that this was a touch au (i wanted to cover everything, scene included, with "au", but perhaps "a touch ooc" would have been more appropriate a warning for me to give?). :] thanks for your comments--i appreciate well thought out feedback.
  • Rotten

    (#) Alin_X_Zane 2010-03-16 01:38:42 AM

    I really liked it and in my opinion that actually suited Vincent's personality perfectly. The out side he seems to be...morbid and dark but on the inside he's in pain...hated rotten things fit his personality so well I was surprised that you wrote about it because everyone just sticks to the one story but think about it...he hates himself for what he is ... and it showed this in your story with out you intending it. Cloud in this story is sort of an image of vincent on the inside so well done I love it!

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