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Chapter 2

by SSpeedy 2 Reviews

The button is activated and the effect is awkward. This introduces the effects and the reson why Fur will fly.

Category: Skyland - Rating: PG - Genres: Action/Adventure - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/01 - Updated: 2007/01/02 - 306 words

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  • Fighting Like Animals

    (#) hyperpsychomaniac 2007-01-13 04:15:32 AM

    Well... this is very odd. XD But hey, we could probably use a bit of Skyland randomness. I got a giggle from Diwan and Oslo falling on each other.

    With your paragraphs though, the whole a ton of sentences with a single space thing, then a double space... it's a little confusing. It's probably better to just use double spacings between each line. It's far easier to read.

    Oh, and if you can... do you think you'd be able to write in Cortes-as-kangaroo giving someone (or something) a really big kick? If it fits in with the story. I just think that'd be really funny. :)

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