julius is in the hospital, delilah doesn't know if he'll make it.
This story is nice. It's a big fast thought. But I see that you separate your paragraphs now so that's a bonus! Well done on that.
wow, you're writing quicker than we can read! I opened the story and was like: omg!
really nice story though I still don't see how they can get off the plane and know instantly it's Ice but ... well, as I said, good job!
i loved it!! :D u should continue it thou XD !!!
its shorter than most other D&J stories but still, its great!!
(#) sky01 2008-03-10
Great story, you rushed a bit could of added more detail put great story plot.
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