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Ragged

by paua_dragon 1 Reviews

a fairy laments over a fallen nation, one-shot

Category: Fantasy - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Parody - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2007/01/03 - Updated: 2007/01/04 - 530 words - Complete

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  • Ragged

    (#) Greater_Basilisk 2007-01-31 10:30:43 PM

    Your style is easy to read; you're good at bringing out the atmosphere you want. Two suggestions: Fix the "it's" that are supposed to be "its" and vice versa, and try to avoid incomplete sentences. They interrupt the smooth flow of your story. Keep writing!

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