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Independence Day
(#) Dragen 2007-01-04
What another great chapter, I like the idea about the Head of the Potters ring.
I like what happened when Harry and Hermione put the rings on, what does that amd Goblin Legend mean??
So the Potter treat their house-elves very good.
I wonder why Fawkes wants sanctuary??
So until next time, keep up the great work and update soon.Independence Day
(#) matthiasblack 2007-01-04
I can't wait for the board meeting. My anticipation reflects on you wonderful writing skills and I hope that you keep up the good work.Independence Day
(#) Alorkin 2007-01-05
Two more great chapters! The 'seduction' was well writ, says I! Hermione handeled her part with the careful planning and attention to detail she has always shown. Mr Granger is truly understanding...much like Kinsfire had him in 'Family Matters' Also, the quote from Heinlein was well received. The 'food that talks' from 'intervention' was also funny.
When Harry and Heremione visited Gringotts, they spoke to Remus, but where did Remus come from? (and please don't say: 'from Mr. and Mrs. Lupin'.)
Ch 8. Hermione haas accepteed th hous-lf bond well, ow hat th reasoon has been carfully explained. I used that same reason in a few of my own fics.
Sharing the food prepared for the elves has quite likely created a bond of fierce loyalty for Harry's house elves. I'd imagine that they see Harry and Hermione as people who view House elves as equals. Well done!
Th swim att St Kitts, was most intriguing. I've tried that in scuba gar, but I don't think it's quite the same.
Dumbles&co. ar in for a nasty surpris when the board meets. That should be a world of fun!
I eagerly await the next page of 'Indpendence Day'. AlorkinIndependence Day
(#) animemonster 2007-01-05
Interesting story. I can't wait to find out what happens at the board meeting.Independence Day
(#) Skoell 2007-01-06
i read many fics were fawkes would leave dumbles, but also immediatly bonds with harry...i find that hard to believe that a bonded person could be changed so quickly...SO i think your idea of a sanctuary seeking phoenix is a great idea!!
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