Well this is an interesting chapter if i do say so myself.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-01-04 11:48:34 PMI hope you don't mind me rating as hot, it's not just because of the utter passion you so brilliantly wrote but because the whole thing was hot, right from the stepping outside the studio. You know like when you put a pan of boiling water and it simmers, then it bubbles, then it boils and then sometimes ( if you're stupid enough ) it boils over where you've been upstairs on ficwad too much. That's what this chapter was like.
I adored everything especially how Kate wants old Patrick back and the way he was with her.
In all fairness, don't know if I'd have slapped him but I'm not Kate. I'm Katy.
Author's responseCheese and crackers of course i don't mind! i am so happy that you liked it and i know Kate slapping Patrick was kind of like a "say what?" action but i wanted to display how irrational her thinking process was in coming to terms with her feelings, 'cause i mean the girl is insane not only to slap Patrick but to run outside into the freezing wearing nothing but a tank top and a pair of boxer shorts with crazy people looking to kill her. lol.
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-27 03:58:56 PMAhh Patrick. You're funny.
I laugh at people "pitching tents" all the time. I'm glad you used that phrase.
I was so afraid they'd get into bed and Sean would pop out of the closet with a knife. I was holding my breath for half the chapter.
I might be ridiculous enough to review every chapter.