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Beginnings and a death. All the basic information.

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006-11-25 - Updated: 2006-11-25 - 1046 words

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Second Chances (tentative title)

(#) water_dragon 2006-11-25

um... did you know this story is on the page three times at all? but it's good, very good
Author's response
No I didn't...not really that great with computers...thanks for letting me know. And thanks for the positive review. The story was just something to get me out of my life...Do you write? P.S. sorry for bad punctuation, commas and periods just don't make sense to me...those dots do.
Second Chances (tentative title)

(#) Rab 2006-11-26

That was pretty sweet. I loved the detail in this, really nice work :)