"You think that Hell is only for the damned? You fool."
- brilliant! you definitely need to send this on for the contest. just read through it a few more times, because there were a few spelling errors, sentence fragments, blah, blah, and it was only a bit confusing in the beginning with the switch between characters, but other than that it was amazing. I love the concept of Hell being in his mind and the walls getting smaller.
awesome favorites and good luck with the contest
Author's responseThank you very much for telling me about the spelling errors kicks Microsoft Word that's exactly the kind of input that I need. I'll try to fix up the confusingness. Takes the Kettles' advice and begins to reread.