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A Little Slice of Hell

"You think that Hell is only for the damned? You fool."

Category: Fantasy - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2007/01/07 - Updated: 2007/01/07 - 2383 words - Complete

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• A Little Slice of Hell

  (#) Kettles 2007-01-07 04:24:19 PM

  brilliant! you definitely need to send this on for the contest. just read through it a few more times, because there were a few spelling errors, sentence fragments, blah, blah, and it was only a bit confusing in the beginning with the switch between characters, but other than that it was amazing. I love the concept of Hell being in his mind and the walls getting smaller.
  
  awesome favorites and good luck with the contest
  
  ~kettles

  Author's response

  Thank you very much for telling me about the spelling errors kicks Microsoft Word that's exactly the kind of input that I need. I'll try to fix up the confusingness. Takes the Kettles' advice and begins to reread.

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