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The Theory of Immortality

It took Alphonse all the self-restraint he had to not just kick himself when he thought about how many times he had passed his brother on that road, in that jail, right in Central, when he was so d...

Category: Full Metal Alchemist - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Alphonse Elric, Edward Elric, Riza Hawkeye, Roy Mustang - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/01/07 - Updated: 2007/01/08 - 14231 words - Complete

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• The Theory of Immortality

  (#) SinisterlySweet 2007-01-12 05:15:26 PM

  You...you made me cry! SEVERAL TIMES!
  
  Beautiful story though, my god. Every character was perfectly written, each part was so fitting and I loved your wording. And you made me cry, which means it had to be good. Curses, sniff.

• The Theory of Immortality

  (#) Kestrel 2007-01-15 12:58:24 AM

  Oh the awesomeness! It's blinding in its glory! :-D

• The Theory of Immortality

  (#) bellemainec 2007-02-26 04:41:03 AM

  This was great, fabulous structure and consistent plotting and characterisation. great piece of writing!

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