- Wow, that was moving. I forgot that Julius had died and it hit me like a brick. I don't think I could ever kill Delilah or Julius in my stories. You guys have that kind of power that I don't have man.
Good writting, like always. There was a repetition though. "You must be freezing." was said twice and too close together. Watch out for that. It causes my brain to think that time rewinded.
But none the less, keep up the good work. You hit the heart strings like a true guitarist.
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