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LUPINE LAMENTATIONS

by Quillian 4 Reviews

Lupin comes by to talk to Harry...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Action/Adventure, Crossover - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/01/09 - Updated: 2007/01/09 - 2512 words

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  • The Heir of Gryffindor

    (#) neely61 2007-01-09 11:48:32 AM

    Good chapter. I like like how it is developing this time. Just a note on Professor Lupin, if he taught as a professor in the States then it would have been at the university level as instructors from high school and lower are just referred to as teachers. I think that would probably carry over to the magical community as well.
  • The Heir of Gryffindor

    (#) whatareyouevensaying 2007-01-09 02:17:06 PM

    Pretty good chapter. A bit short, as it was really only one extended scene, but I liked it. Hope to see more soon.
  • The Heir of Gryffindor

    (#) Silvanis 2007-01-09 03:55:27 PM

    You make a good point about Remus. Rowling never said what he did before he taught at Hogwarts so it is likely he was a professor somewhere. All in all the story continues to make me want more. Keep up the good work.
  • The Heir of Gryffindor

    (#) Alorkin 2007-01-10 05:39:15 PM

    The incluson of Remus in the story maks sense. Why does JKR never even consider the emotions of those who have seen a loved one, die. In book five, she did a reasonably accurate job of portraying the anger and pain Harry felt after Cedric died, yet in H.A.P. she 'turned him off' as it were. He went from an angry but determined young man who had just watched his godfather, a man he respected and even lived, die. Who'd just destroyed Dumblefutz' office because he had no other outlet foor his pen-up emotions, and yet in book sux, he's fine with it all.
    OK, I'm off my soapbox, now.
    I await the next page of 'Heir'.
    Alorkin

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