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Water and Oil

by holding_heaven 1 Reviews

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Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/09 - Updated: 2007/01/09 - 63 words - Complete

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  • Water and Oil

    (#) MarkPoa 2007-01-13 09:17:06 AM

    There's a deliberate attempt here that I've noted that makes the poetry deeper than it looks. I'm still trying to find the reasoning for the highlighting of the "a" vowel, though I initially had the idea that it may be the author's loved one for whom the poem was written is someone named "A----".

    Probably. :) Or I could be waaay off.

    Good poem though. Rereading it makes me think of how it could be interpreted and that's always interesting when reading poetry... at least for me.

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