(#) Particle_Accelerator 2007-01-16corrections: lingerie, horcrux(es)
Comments: A horcrux is a very secret, very taboo piece of dark arts. No way is it common knowledge, nor would the Ministry allow knowledge of such to be disseminated. The DA wouldn't know until Ron & Hermione let them in on it. Hermione suddenly becoming "all girly-girl" with the make-up is odd. Ron & Hermione would be more distraught if Harry was out there alone. They seem almost flippant.
Questions: Is this a Harry/Hermione piece? Why isn't Hermione Head Girl?
Overall grade: B
(#) xkashi_queenx 2007-01-17Thanks for your support!
No, Hermione isn't Head Girl in my story. She deserves it right?
I thought that Hermione and Ron were already distraught. Hmmm.
The purpose of Hermone, Ron and Ginny telling about what they know is significant to my plot that I have. You'll see! :-)
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