- What a great end to the story, both Vernon and Dudley got what was coming to them.
Who would have thought that Padma Patil and Snape would get married??
Ron got what he wanted in life, to own the Chudley Cannons and have them win, shame that he dead in freak broom accident at the age of forty-seven.
And who would have thought that Luna and Fred would get married also.
Harry done great a lot of good over his life time...
- A nice wrap-up. Dumbledore's futile objection to Harry's facing Voldy, was well written. Equally well stated was the goblin's complete disdain towards him. He'd had Harry's entire lifetime to teach him, and yet, had failed. They had less than a year, and accomplshed everythnig Dd's meddlng interference did not. Moody stunning him about made my day. Albus' statement "...now he'll be worse than Tom!" especally in the face of said hero having just defeated said Tom, was completely indefensable. What did Dumbles expect? Harry should have wrapped Voldy in a warm cuddly hug?
Dumbles was a user, hunh? I can see the decline, and his justification. "I can handle it.' or: "It's a temporary thing. I'll only use it until I'm better."
The epilog was nicly done. The only surprise to me was Padma marrying Severus. I suppose that even snarky greasy gits should find love somewhere. I loved that Harry sued the two most annoying pests in his life.
Those few books that did get sold before the recall, would soon be collector's items.
I can't wait to see what you write next! Alorkin
- I really enjoyed the fic. Whilst you aren't the most talented author on the internet, I think you are perhaps the most talented who churns out fic like Cadbury's churns out chocolate.
The quality of writing is usually above average. The plot lines are excellent, and quite frankly, your update speed is what keeps me attracted. A new chapter every couple of days will make anyone come back again and again.
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