- GAH! Holy sh*t that has to suck. Getting pregnant from the first time? Youch. If I were Al and Scaret, I'd made sure ALL of the girls in the Academy were on birth control and that the guys were 'equipped' if you know what I mean. I'm probably the only one in my family that isn't pregnant before the age of 20 and trust me, it doesn't look good on them.
AAAAAaaanyways, good story. I really liked how it started. So sneaky and romantic.
- That's a great story line you've got going on there, but quite a few spelling mistakes, and grammer mistakes...I suggest getting someone to edit your stories for ya, before you post the fics, okay? My main account is on fanfiction.net, where all my fanfics are, so before you harp on me, check there. Lol. This is just a suggestion, but I thionk you have a great set-up for your fic. Keep it up!!!
Author's responsesryu if their are any grammar and spelling mistakes im only 13.
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