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A little talk

by divachick34 6 Reviews

Delilah and julius have been going out for 2 months and everything has been going great until something unexpected happens. ****************************************** i hope you like it its on...

Category: Delilah and Julius - Rating: G - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2007/01/13 - Updated: 2007/01/13 - 1078 words

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  • What will I say?

    (#) gucci84 2007-01-13 11:45:20 AM

    GAH! Holy sh*t that has to suck. Getting pregnant from the first time? Youch. If I were Al and Scaret, I'd made sure ALL of the girls in the Academy were on birth control and that the guys were 'equipped' if you know what I mean. I'm probably the only one in my family that isn't pregnant before the age of 20 and trust me, it doesn't look good on them.

    AAAAAaaanyways, good story. I really liked how it started. So sneaky and romantic.
  • What will I say?

    (#) redfoxfan 2007-01-13 04:22:12 PM

    That's a great story line you've got going on there, but quite a few spelling mistakes, and grammer mistakes...I suggest getting someone to edit your stories for ya, before you post the fics, okay? My main account is on fanfiction.net, where all my fanfics are, so before you harp on me, check there. Lol. This is just a suggestion, but I thionk you have a great set-up for your fic. Keep it up!!!
    =3
    -Me

    Author's response

    sryu if their are any grammar and spelling mistakes im only 13.
  • What will I say?

    (#) panda_1418 2007-01-14 05:41:50 PM

    Oh man, that HAS to suck. Poor kids. Update soon, mucho exciting!
  • What will I say?

    (#) darks00 2007-01-17 04:06:53 PM

    Besides the spelling errors, this is a really good story! Please update soon!

    xxDarkness' Kidxx
  • What will I say?

    (#) crispycrunch 2007-12-22 04:37:06 PM

    om goshh that sucks but i bet their baby would be soo cute :P lol i hope she has the baby i mean! it is a gud chapter thou XD !!

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