(#) rainydaykid13 2007-01-19hiya bro! good story, but you spelled a couple words wrong. need to work on your usage of the english language and further develop your own specific style of writing though. but as for the story, radtacular ^^ cant wait for more.
Author's responseSorry, I was tired when I was writing it, so I didn't really remember to spell check
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