"You like to cut do the chase, don't you?"
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2007-01-15 03:21:53 AMIt's good but can't you use another name besides Saffron? It's getting kinda old. No offense or anything but you need to create another name if you create another character.
Author's responseThank you! But, um, I thought I already created another character when I started using Musetta...? Like I said, this is a companion fic to the other one, so obviously Saffron will make occasional appearances.
(#) XOXOshrillexXOXO 2007-01-15 12:17:58 PM"Like I said, this is a companion fic to the other one, so obviously Saffron will make occasional appearances."
Noted. And all I mean is that it shows up way much. I don't know though maybe I'm just seeing things.
Author's responseHmm, I've only mentioned her once in this chapter, so perhaps you've still got my other story in mind. Anyway, thank you for your input :)
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-19 08:40:14 AMdon't worry.
obviously saffron will make an appearance because she is ryan's girl, but this is about brendon. I get it. And it's not overdone.
Author's responseOh,thanks ^__^ I was getting a little worried there. I hope you liked it, dear!
(#) alyssaatthedisco 2007-01-19 09:38:55 PMOooh! I really like this! Very cool! And the names you choose are so unique and very fitting. The visual imagery and descriptions are very well done. And as I mentioned, I love your style of writing. Thanks for posting!
Author's responseFWEE! I hoped you would! Awsh, your review always make me blush and squee with glee. Thank YOU for being an awesome reviewer!