Does she stand him up? Pehaps.
- I think I may have to amend my statement about babies being 06'. Cause this totally calls for some.
Author's responseNo babies in '07? Since when? Besides, I'm bored with all our other kids. They just aren't cute anymore. And they're so needy. Every other day, they're begging me for food. I'm like "I just fed you guys yesterday. Go outside, Mommy has a hangover." Thanks for the review, miss Feather. :)
(#) bridget 2007-01-24 04:48:25 AMits me! reading instead of getting ready for work.
wow. i loved it! i was worried patrick had left the place and then we'd have drama.
Jerm is behaving exactly the way a teenager who's mom is starting to date would behave. yay!
and i congratulate you on having one of the best closing lines i've read in a while:
boys know better then to get rid of the person who does their laundry or something, i didn't copy and paste.
Author's responseAw, thank you. I'm not a drama kind of person, so I couldn't have him leave. And he seems like the type of guy that would wait around. Have fun at work, love. But not too much fun...
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-24 05:09:34 AMOh, Patrick is so cute! I really love your comentary, especially between Charo and her children. It's totally brilliant! Now, hurry up and update!
Author's responseI was hoping he would come off as cute and not as creepy. There's a fine line between the two. Thanks for the review and I'll try my best to update soon.
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-01-24 11:05:54 AM"He won't hurt you. Boys know better than to get rid of a woman who does their laundry."
Author's responseHumorous, but true. Men know better. Why do you think my parents are still together? The man has no idea what fabric softener is nor what to do with it. Oh well. Updates are underway.
- R Kelly? Hahaha
So glad she hadn't stood Patty McHatty up. I don't think I could have taken the drama! Cute, funny and realistic. Your 13 year old boy was just so spot on.
And you make me want to squeeze Patrick's chubby little cheeks (face, not ass........or whatever)
Have a point, lady. I love it xx
Author's responseI had to stick an R. Kelly reference in there somewhere. What kind of writer would I be if I didn't? I never intended for Charlie to stand him up. I just wanted to wave some drama in everyone's face. However, expect my 13 year old to start some serious trouble. Just wait until Patrick meets the kids.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-01-25 07:27:46 AMThe good points maxed out - that fricking sucks! This was funny, original and pure genius.
I couldn't read it fast enough, i was just willing for Charlie to get to the date and when I saw she finally got there - i was so relieved!!! YAY!
You had Trick down to a P - I mean Tee.....
Author's responseAre they?!?!? Now I know how Alex feels. She's always maxed out.
Ya know, I was wondering when my ladies would review. I was getting worried. I thought maybe you guys drank the kool-aid without me or something. I feel better now.
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-25 08:19:58 AMHow neadz two pruve-reed?
Ha ha, Charlie’s son is a self-righteous teen. Maybe a little too young for Kylene but they are definitely on the same wave-length. Namely their own one.
I can’t believe “milf” actually made it into the (American) English lexicon. That’s so horrible. HORRIBLE… ;)
Oh. OH! I totally have that hair thing with my sister. She’s got great straight hair and I… will shut up about it already.
/"Look, Joce, I'm ripping his head off." The tiny girl grimaced.
"Mom! Jerm is ripping people's heads off." I sighed. He glowered at the affectionate nickname his sibling gave him.
"Jerm, stop ripping heads off." I replied automatically as I strapped on some fancy heels. My son took a sidelong glance at me./ -> I can clearly see the pros of a nice single Mom family life.
"I'm sorry Jeremy. I'm at that awkward age where I'm a parent, but I'm not dead yet." -> Ha ha! Hilarious. I love that last line.
Charlie is hilarious when she’s explaining her speeding to the cop. You are hilarious. I need to expand my vocab. Milf.
Oh boy. I almost forgot I am the waitress. Goooooooooooooo, me! Ha ha… many kudos for the double-reference. And even more thanks. :)
Oooookay. Obviously you don’t need my petty little rating points. But just so you know, I would have rated this “funny”. Because I am not dead yet either.
You rock like Amadeus!
Sorry for the late review. I suck. :( I got finals. And stuff’s got me down. But I loves your stories!!!
Author's responseOh my. Quite the review. My heart is swelling. I forgive you, I know you've been busy with the finals of doom. I know how you feel. Take your time, my curly haired counterpart. If you ever need to talk to someone, I'm here.places hand on your shoulder Aw, that was so afterschool special. xoxoxoxo