Ever wonder what the quiet kid's thinking about when he gets picked on? (Not for the squeamish)
Well, I only have a couple of complaints. 1. I do not, brag about my killing ability. 2. Your dead on about the extra bullet. 3. It was a damn good story keep writing and one more thing. Great detail in the death scenes.
(#) Sage 2005-12-09
Two words...Fucking Brilliant
Author\'s Response: ...thank you
Not bad. There are a few typos that need to be addressed, and a couple of misspellings. Neat premis. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
Author\'s Response: No matter how many times I edit I suppose I am always going to miss a few mistakes but as long as you know what word I was trying to spell I see it as an issue but I’ll keep working on it, hope you enjoy the rest of my stories.
Your spelling sucks, but the story was pretty good. Nice ending.
thaks for bringing that to my attention, i went back and fixed it up a bit, i doubt i got everything though but i tried
(#) GR21 2006-11-29
A little bloody with the cheerleaders but otherwise it's a dream come true
isn't it though :)
Ahahahaha...I've had a dream alot like this before. Stupid cheerleaders...great job!
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