It had to happen sooner or later: Sheena's lips do more than just talk to Mystery Man.
(#) rawrlittledino 2007-01-27 02:42:20 PMI DON'T HAVE ANY CHOICE BUT TO KEEP MY MOUTH SHUT DO I?
I DON'T KNOW WHO IT FRIGGIN' WAS!
Egh. God damnit.
Haha, another amazing chapter from my daughter, as usual.
They updates may be few but they are worth waiting for.
Author's responseThat's the idea behind Myster Man, dude. ;) I'm not actually dropping clues because you'll find out soon anyway.
Thank you, mother. I hope so. :)
- Right, lady. Me and you, outside now and I'm going to beat it out of you. Who is it? Who? Tell me!
And on a less sinister note, gah!
From funny to moving in one chapter. You never fail to amaze me.
Even if it means you have to fail your finals, update. Please!!
Point for the Austrian chick with the smug grin :-)
Author's responseSome... dude?
From that description, I can tell that you've been stalking me. ;) Thanks, Ri. Once you reviewed, I know I'm good. :)
- Seriously! That was phenom (that's short for phenomenal because I'm too lazy to write it out, but now I just defeated that purpose, smooth.)
I can't handle not knowing who this boy is. I have three guesses though ;)
Yeah, I'm a nerd. Here, have a rating point, even if it is from a nerd like me.
Author's responseIt's good you pointed that out because I thought it was short for 'phenomental'. Maybe I have been called insane and crazy too much. Nah.
Nerdy rating points are the cream of the crop!
- Sheena kissed the mystery confidant?!?!?! Why is he macking on my namesake's mother? I literally covered my mouth in shock. I made the :O face, but it wasn't sexy. At all. I think Sheena's just...confused? She misses her man(and with good reason) and this ex-FOBer is available. I'm torn here. I love that you're taking the story in a completely different direction, but I miss the silliness that is Alex. I am in awe of your versatility. And might I gush about how cute the sunset flashback was? I didn't think you had it in you. Maybe she misses the romantic Patrick. Once again, with good reason. OK, now I'm rambling. Enjoy my point. You deserve it.
Author's responseYes, that's why Sheena did what she did. And... hm, still in their older years, the FOBies still hold a certain je-ne-sais-quois. I really don't know.
Yes, in fact, I did not have the sunset flashback in me. ;) That was Rose. Thanks for the comments and point. DoJhuggage
(#) Bridget 2007-01-27 11:49:52 PM...ok...umm...umm...andy? now I'm thinking its not pete. cause Sheena wouldn't mack on pete for a million bucks. cause its PETE. unless my sleepless mind (who ran into her boss at a bar tonight no less--weird) forgot taht you told us who it was already?
great chapter. but...eeep talk about flipping my perfect sheena/patrick world onto its head.
Author's responseRight. Nope, I didn't. ;)
Oh well... nothing's ever perfect in Alexworld. Except for Pete's hair. But that's a force of nature no one can control really.
(#) jessiearei 2007-01-28 11:35:23 AMahh! she kissed another FOB memeber! what was she thinking?!? im upset with sheena. haha update again soon! i want to know who it was!!
Author's responseRight. If I wasn't so jealous myself, I'd be pretty disappointed in Sheena, too...
You'll find out soon. Thanks for the r&r! :)
(#) Amaranthea 2007-01-29 06:51:28 PMOh, FG...you're going to drive me insane. But in a good way. Argh! Sheena's being such a bad girl, and me being the nosy tart that I am, I want to know with whom! Pretty please, reveal the source of temptation soonish?
Author's responseHa ha. Thank you very much! :)
Yes, I will. Because I have a couple of the scenes written already and I'm dying to get your reactions.