(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-29wow. we're getting closer to the truth now. yeah, and that constance lady was evil. talking about widdle gerard like that. oh yeah, thanks for the comments yesterday...they helped me a lot.and i am trying to get a new chap out today. like now. lol.
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-29Ah! I couldn't believe I'm the first to rate this chapter! I gave it an 'Exciting' because... well, it was exciting.
I thought this chapter was especially good for a couple reasons. First of all, your description of the church Kyle attended seemed so authentic. I could really picture those people, preaching 'God's word' then going out and being so judgemental. I think we can all relate to knowing people like that. We all wish we could be Monica and tell them off.
Secondly, the dream was great! I'm glad we finally got a deeper look into Kyle's death, even though you don't go out and directly say anything. So now we know Monica was there when he died. I wonder how Gerard will react to knowing this... I'm sure he suspects.
Anyway, wonderful chapter! I can't wait for more! Oh, and do you actually write these chapters every day? Or do you write a bunch all at once and then just post a bit every day? I always wondered.
Author's responseThanks..There is actually a preacher out of Topeka that this woman would belong to his church. He is the most vile excuse for a human I have ever seen. He hates gays, shit he just hates and it gets put on T.V. Ok I'm done venting... Thanks for the rating. Those still bug me!!(my bad ones)Actually I write very late at night. Well, early morning like 3:00 AM. Right now I have 4 chapters ready but I'm working on a really hard one (you can prpbably guess what it's about) and it is taking me alot longer.
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