What is it about lies that make them so addictive? Ry/Bren one-shot
(#) xxlaurenxx 2007-02-01 05:42:54 PMquestion; is this a one shot?
it was so-so in my oppinon. i wasnt too fond of the doctor suse way that you wrote and explained things, it seems unnatural, illiterate. i dont know...
another thing; i think we've all read this exact story before; at least i know i have. The one where the two boys like eachother and things work out perfectly. maybe i just have strange taste but it seemed too bland
i hate to be and/or sound like a bitch when reviewing, i just think that reviews are ment to be honest and some what critical at times to make people better writers. hope you understand
Author's responseYes, this is a one-shot.
Thank you for being honest in your review. I believe that's the point of a good review as well and I appreciate your honesty.
Mmm.. There probably have been similar. At times I know I can get a little clichè with my fics. Probably one thing best to be avoided.
Also, about the writing style I used in this fic; I thought I'd give it a go to see how it turned out. Maybe a little too different and yes, maybe a little too illiterate. I can see how you would find it to be the way you did.
But, yes, thank you for the review and your honesty. I appreciate it.
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-02-05 04:02:53 PMWho the HELL rated this Mary-Sue???? Sweetie, there was nothing wrong with this. Hell, this was amazing. I liked the shortness of the sentences, it made the story all the better. Geez...shakes head You never write anything badly. See, I could challenge you to write something different to see if you could do it, but seriously, you'd destroy the challenge with your writing amazazingness. (Totally made that word up.) No, but really. I have a question: Is there ANYTHING that you can't write? (I can't do fight sequences) Well, anyway, GREAT JOB AND WRITE MORE!!!