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One Last Dance

by RedK_addict 2 Reviews

The gang wraps it all up. Clark finally gets Lana.

Category: Smallville - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama, Romance - Characters: Clark Kent, Lex Luthor, Other - Warnings: [!] [?] - Published: 2007/02/01 - Updated: 2007/02/02 - 1043 words

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  • Despair's Edge

    (#) fruit_addict 2007-03-13 06:50:46 PM

    Yay you finished it! It was great although the ending was a little confusing, and vague. Jus the fact that you don't really know who the pheonix is, what that's about and what was going on with the cell mate. But it was a really good read.
  • Despair's Edge

    (#) fruit_addict 2007-03-13 07:05:40 PM

    Hey again. Just forgot to mention somethin'. I loved how you wrote in songs during the story. Kinda set a mood and they related to the story. You probably noticed this but parts of the songs are missing in the lyrics and some of the lyrics aren't right. Such as in don't dream it's over... it's 'you'll never reach the end of the road' not 'you'll never see the end of the road'. But I understand why you didn't put in all the songs... it would take a bit too long, take away from the story. Awesome story.

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