Naruto has risked it all so many times in the past, but this battle's consequences could destroy him - even if he's victorious! Now he must find the strength - and the desire - to face down not on...
- Do an alternate ending where Sasuke survives....I don't like LeeSaku. Besides that, good job! :)
Author's responseReally? I've always been a fan of LeexSakura. he's a sweety and deserves his chance at glory, too.
But, just so you know that I'm not entirely impassionate to all the SasukexSakura fans , that seperate story is already in the works.
No alternate ending this time, but you'll get a story that has your S&S and is (hopefully) just as good-if not better than this one.
- This was a very well written story, one that kept my attention and brought me along with it. I almost think the pacing was a bit too fast - it could have been a bit longer. But for a first fic, it definitely was a winner! I would love to see more stories from you!
Author's responseThanks for the suggestions! I can get really long-winded sometimes, so I kept it short. But it's nice to know that I could go longer without worry. What aspects, in your opinion, would you have liked to see extended? Or was it just the length of the story in general (add more sub-plot)?
(#) astrid 2007-03-17 08:12:36 PMkinda funny I read another naruto fic that mentioned that nobody reviews on this site so when i read I read your fic I had to review. it was great, great detail, great writing, great plot, it was really sad too with all the character deathes but still what great story doesn't have tragedy. so I give you the highest rating a fic can have, (i'll let you know when I figure out what that is, but when I do your gonna get it!) anyway ja ne!
- ACK! sorry I wasen't sighend in when I wrote your review oh well, I'm theo ne that said that I thought it was great and laughed because I read another fic that said that no one reveiws on this site because its not really well known. anyway GREAT FIC can't wait for your other work ja ne!
Author's responseThanks for the review, and for the rating (once you give it!) I love ratings! They get me around those filters and get my story read more! ;)