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Chapter 1

Imagine losing years off your life... Keri Atwater works as a bar tender in a local night club. Aside from having a moderately exciting but not the best paying job in the world, something else isn...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Drama - Characters: Bob Bryar - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2007/01/29 - Updated: 2007/01/30 - 1235 words

Reviews

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) Alison 2007-01-29 08:53:03 PM

  Oooo What happened to Derrik? scary! hehe update soon! I love it soooo much! your a ver very good author! great job!

  Author's response

  Thanks =)
  I try. I was really worried that this chapter really sucked. But it seems to get better towards the end :)

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) xifellintoxfantasyx 2007-01-29 11:07:47 PM

  looka awsome I hope to be reading more of it soon!

  Author's response

  Ohh, You will. ;)
  
  Just as soon as I get the next chapter done XD

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) haleyxhomicide 2007-01-30 04:47:11 AM

  This is great so far!! I love it!
  
  hahah Derrick Is hilarious.
  I was imagining his voice everytime he said something.
  LOL update soon

  Author's response

  Hahaha, I love Derrick too. I was just writing him at the top of my head. Haha.

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) xxAshers88 2007-01-30 02:49:02 PM

  I love it! Can't wait to read more. =)

  Author's response

  Thanks bunches =)

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) AlexSanDee 2007-01-30 03:53:28 PM

  Great start. Nice descriptions. I'm hooked.

  Author's response

  Thanks XD

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-01-30 04:40:54 PM

  wow. that was great. i only wish i could be as articulate in my descriptions and such.

  Author's response

  It comes with practice, and a lot of anxiety-ridden nights, waking up panicking.
  Haha. It's not very easy, believe me.

• When Your Heart Stops Beating

  (#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-02-03 03:17:13 PM

  very intriguing...can't wait for more

  Author's response

  Thanks :) I'll be updating soon, hopefully.

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