Heather enters the crematorium in Brookhaven...
(#) Salem 2005-08-29 04:07:31 PMProfound, well-written, a really nice piece of storytelling. I love Stanley, and it's so rare to see something with him too - this one was top-notch.
The only nitpick I can possibly make is how Heather's motivation and potential emotions are only detailed at an authro's note; you well could include those thoughts inside the story. Even and though, this doesn't stop it to be worthwile. Very well done. You have my support.