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Chapter 1: The Unspeakable

by Lourdes 3 Reviews

The Sequel to "For Them... And for Us: The Strength of Twelve". Over a year later and the group has slowly been healing, exciting times giving them cause to find happiness once again. Yet just wh...

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance - Characters: Chouji, Gaara, Hinata, Ino, Iruka, Jiraiya, Kakashi, Kurenai, Naruto, Neji, Rock Lee, Sakura, Shikamaru, Tenten, Tsunade, Other - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2007/02/10 - Updated: 2007/02/10 - 5348 words

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  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) gecko 2007-02-11 09:39:29 AM

    i think that you need to add another chapter soon so i can stop living in suspence!!!!! i like it by the way.
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) marikunin 2007-02-12 05:56:08 AM

    OH MY GAWD, YOU GOTTA CONTINUE!!!
    Have Sasuke come in as a ghost or something and freak Naruto out....that'd be funny....^^;

    Author's response

    Can't do that (wouldn't really fit the plot), but don't worry. Sasuke is in the character line up for a reason.
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) Entilzah 2007-02-12 06:50:16 AM

    An excellent start, and completely unexpected element of the traitor. Very good insight into Naruto's mindset (i.e. it would never occur to him that a friend would betray him).

    Though I suspect this is not true (dramatic tension and all that), I sincerely hope Hinata does not take this too poorly.

    Excellent start and I look forward to follow ups!

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