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Chapter 2: In Pursuit of Him

by Lourdes 3 Reviews

Betrayed and bewildered, Naruto is in a position he never would have thought possible. Now he must adapt and overcome if he is to live long enough to secure the safety of everything he knows and l...

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance - Characters: Chouji, Gaara, Hinata, Ino, Iruka, Itachi, Jiraiya, Kakashi, Kurenai, Naruto, Neji, Rock Lee, Sakura, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Tenten, Tsunade - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2007/02/12 - Updated: 2007/02/12 - 4746 words

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  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) marikunin 2007-02-13 05:49:18 AM

    The Lee/Sakura moment was very believable, and even though I don't support the pairing, I will say that it was very well written. Please continue! :)
    .................That was probably one of my most serious reviews ever....^^;

    Author's response

    Haha! Don't worry, I won't respect you less for being serious! XD But thank you for the review!
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) Entilzah 2007-02-13 06:47:20 AM

    Wooo.... not to much to critize on this! Very well done, and an excellent picture painted. I definitely feel for Tsunade's delimma... doing what is Correct (ANBU) or what is Right (letting Naruto handle it).

    The Sakura/Lee scene, while a little abrupt, was very well done. But then again... I like my seductions drawn out a bit! Which Lee, of course, would NEVER do!

    Well done

    Author's response

    The Sakura/Lee scene actually started out longer. I'm of the same mindset as you. But when I proofed the story that part just didn't sound right. Lee's far too proper for what I had written before. (Nothing raunchy, he's just not a demanding person.) And I didn't want things to get carried away because of their location and the respect it requires.
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) zaradomim 2007-03-13 07:09:40 PM

    Wow, a very interesting story, and you are the only other person i know of, besides me, that supports the sakuraXlee pairing.

    Keep up the good work!

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