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Chapter 4: Dark Dreams; Crimson Nightmares

by Lourdes 4 Reviews

Naruto's fate rests in the hands of those he loves. Now the team must find a way to uncover the truth or risk losing their leader - their friend - forever. Yet sometimes reality is far more frigh...

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance - Characters: Chouji, Hinata, Ino, Iruka, Itachi, Jiraiya, Kakashi, Naruto, Neji, Rock Lee, Sakura, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Tenten, Tsunade, Other - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2007/02/16 - Updated: 2007/02/17 - 5148 words

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  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) marikunin 2007-02-17 02:54:01 PM

    :: nearly dies ::
    continue! :)

    Author's response

    Okay, really, if this kills you your family isn't going to come after me, right? I really couldn't handle killing off my readers. XD
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) Entilzah 2007-02-19 08:42:42 AM

    Ok... let the record show that you are back on your "A Game!"

    I was mesmerized and drawn in throughout the entire chapter. The mystery of what is happening is a pleasant surprise. Your characterizations of all of the characters seems spot on and really make me believe they are real people!

    For today's constructive criticism: um... er... oh forget it! It was great. Write more!

    Author's response

    Okay, but first I'm going to squeal like an excited school girl. If you'll excuse me... EEEEEEEEEEE!
    I love it that I'm sucking people into my little world!
  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) thegrimwombat 2007-02-19 10:58:31 AM

    I've been following this (and the previous story) for a while now, but this is my first time reviewing. Just wanted to say you're doing an excellent job -- this is one of the most engaging fics I've read in the fandom!

    Author's response

    Really? Thank you so much! I'm really trying to do my best. I want to avoid being predictable. Readers like to be taken for a loop - from what I've seen - and I hope that I'm constantly leaving people swearing at their monitors and yelling "What the f*?!?!" I think that would be my biggest compliment. XD

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