- Ok... let the record show that you are back on your "A Game!"
I was mesmerized and drawn in throughout the entire chapter. The mystery of what is happening is a pleasant surprise. Your characterizations of all of the characters seems spot on and really make me believe they are real people!
For today's constructive criticism: um... er... oh forget it! It was great. Write more!
Author's responseOkay, but first I'm going to squeal like an excited school girl. If you'll excuse me... EEEEEEEEEEE!
I love it that I'm sucking people into my little world!
(#) thegrimwombat 2007-02-19I've been following this (and the previous story) for a while now, but this is my first time reviewing. Just wanted to say you're doing an excellent job -- this is one of the most engaging fics I've read in the fandom!
Author's responseReally? Thank you so much! I'm really trying to do my best. I want to avoid being predictable. Readers like to be taken for a loop - from what I've seen - and I hope that I'm constantly leaving people swearing at their monitors and yelling "What the f*?!?!" I think that would be my biggest compliment. XD
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