Harry begins to take action to bring his plans to reality, but will fate cooperate this time?
With this chapter the rating for the story goes up to 'R', later chapters will bring it up further t...
Really liked this chapter and the wya things are going. Definetly going to be interesting to see what happens next and I can only hope that Harry and Narcissa stay together.
Another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.
(#) spedclass 2007-02-16 09:41:41 PM
Awesome story i wouldnt mind a little more smut though other than that awesome story.
Very interesting story. I especially liked how you dealt with Lucius. Also I like that Harry is with Narcissa. Will this be a multi pairing story?
(#) Nautilus 2007-02-16 11:52:46 PM
wow, loved it... so did or did not narrisa discuss the letter with her 'husband' (i think not).. anyway, i do look forward to see how you write both harry, and narrisa. she seemed very slytherin so far, and that is something i liked. will she learn to experience more than just power and status that comes from money. i hope so. what happens to draco now...
i liked the convo between the two, narrisa and harry, i honestly think that onces narrisa has a clue of what harry is planning, it will a whole new ball game, she can bring with it a more integrated complextion to the story.
what will dumbles thinkin of this new candidate, dating Mrs. malfoy, who's husband (and draco fingerscrossed) died a most horriable death.
congats agina, update soon.
(#) zephryl 2007-02-17 04:36:19 AM
This is a Great Story :D I hope Harry and Narcissa stay together :) And by reading reviews I think most people feel this way :)
Eagerly Awaiting an Update
(#) DrT 2007-02-17 08:02:56 AM
'United for eternity'? -- Still laughing at that one. Well done indeed.
I thought it was funny too, but I wonder how Draco will react to seeing this side of his dear old daddy? BJH
(#) bumble 2007-02-17 08:08:48 AM
"united for eternity" im still laughing at malfoy going out like that it been great so far please update again soon
(#) killerlord 2007-02-17 08:10:48 AM
good fic i like harry narcissa fic hope you wil be updfating soon
A very well written not-quite-a-seduction scene over tea. I like that Narcissa was smart enough to "handle" Harry's attempted set-up.