Gerard lashes out at Ray. Moncica learns the truth about the break up of Gerard and Liv
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-17 07:53:50 PMi saw that someone or some two people rather rated the last chapter horribly. obviously the morons don't understand the word FICTION. rolls eyes consider their asses kicked too sweetheart. don't worry, i'll win. sometimes the smallest people pack the hardest punch! :) anyway, here's another rating point for ya cause ya almost made me shed a tear!
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-02-17 11:44:09 PMAh!!! That's where you're leaving us? Seriously? This is probably the most emotionally-clif-hanging chapter as of yet; and I'd say, one of my favorite. It was such a turn of events. Suddenly it's Gerard who has to deal with his past and Monica is the one holding the relationship together. But I have no idea how Monica is SOOOO understanging; after dealing with her own issues, it's kind-of like she became the Emotional Superwoman. Oh well, I really like this story and- like a routine- I come back to check on it every day.
Keep up the amazing work!!!
(#) Danishgirl9 2007-02-18 02:10:20 AMOh gosh, this chapter made me tear up...so much emotion in it. really good job!
Author's responseThanks so much, I have to admit some of the chapters are sort of hard for me to write. I guess when I'm writting I feel the emotions of the characters. Anyway thanks again.
- Shit that's bad...sighs
Can I just say though, and no offense to anyone else but I just went for a week without my computer and I one update I really truely missed reading was this one and out of everything it's the first one I caught up on! I love it so much and I am so incrediably thankful to you for writing it. The way you protray the guys and monica and liv is amazing and I don't care what people think about fanfiction this really is a perfect piece of writing. Beth xx
Author's responseOh thank you. It does my heart good to hear people say they love this story as much as I do. In some ways Fanfiction is harder to write than a regular story. In Fanfiction you have established characters that are already known so you have to try to keep at least partly true who they are. In a plain old fiction you can just make up someone and make they be whoever you want. I guess why I try to add so many "real" things in my story is because I'm trying to stay a little bit true to the guys. OK now I'm writing too much so I'll quit. Anyway thats for your kind words.
- are you shittin' me!?
omg... he CAN'T still love that bitch!
you have to update soon!
Author's responseAll I can say (from experience) is LOVE STINKS. OK not all the time. Don't worry about Monica Gee's love has made her a stronger person.