Naruto hates feeling hopeless. Naruto hates being alone. But as he observes his two teammates, he realizes he's both.
Wow that was really good. I mean really good!
If I could make a suggestion, maybe you could right another? Maybe Sasuke's response? Or Sakura's POV?
That was just really well done and I was left totally wanting more, so that's why I ask. :)
OMG OMG OMG!
This was amazing. Totally in character, totally true. Almost poetic. You're amazing.
Beautiful... just beautiful. I'm not sure I could ever see Naruto being quite as depressed as that (While the series makes it clear that Naruto sometimes pretends to be happy even when he's hurt, I'm equally convinced that most of the time, when he smiles he means it), but if he were, you have his kind of reaction to it spot on.
You did an amazing job, really.
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