Xander once had a gift, and a curse. He rejoiced when it ended, but now it's come back... One-shot.
(#) HolyFanfictionBatman 2007-03-07 11:54:26 AMWow. That was awesome. I think you should write a sequal. But thats up to you. Or maybe his friends' reactions...'Of course you see dead people...look at Spike!'. Well, not necesarilly(?)that but, something. Or not. But anyway, it was cool.
- Interesting idea, buy you need to work a bit on the flow of the story; it seemed a bit chopped up, like you were just trying to get your idea down without framing it properly; don't get me wrong, it is a very interesting idea, but you need to transition a bit cleaner between the old thoughts and the current moods and actions. Overall, good work.