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Phantom Sight

Xander once had a gift, and a curse. He rejoiced when it ended, but now it's come back... One-shot.

Category: Buffy the Vampire Slayer - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Crossover, Horror - Characters: Xander - Warnings: [!!] [V] - Published: 2007/02/21 - Updated: 2007/02/21 - 569 words - Complete

Reviews

• Phantom Sight

  (#) tjin 2007-02-22 07:50:10 PM

  not bad.
  
  -Tjin

• Phantom Sight

  (#) HolyFanfictionBatman 2007-03-07 11:54:26 AM

  Wow. That was awesome. I think you should write a sequal. But thats up to you. Or maybe his friends' reactions...'Of course you see dead people...look at Spike!'. Well, not necesarilly(?)that but, something. Or not. But anyway, it was cool.

• Phantom Sight

  (#) yojorocks 2007-08-18 11:52:17 AM

  Interesting idea, buy you need to work a bit on the flow of the story; it seemed a bit chopped up, like you were just trying to get your idea down without framing it properly; don't get me wrong, it is a very interesting idea, but you need to transition a bit cleaner between the old thoughts and the current moods and actions. Overall, good work.

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