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by Bakagirl-wonder 1 Reviews

Alkam a young boy of sixteen discovers the truth behind the lies his beloved Duvan and brother Airk have been telling him. mxm

Category: Fantasy - Rating: R - Genres: Fantasy - Characters:  - Warnings: [?] [R] [Y] - Published: 2007/02/09 - Updated: 2007/02/09 - 934 words

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  • The Magic Poet

    (#) MandelisChaos 2007-03-01 06:17:21 PM

    Great story!! I just wanted to point out that you might want to keep an eye on your contractions. You keep using "your" instead of "you're". Just thought I'd mention that.
    ~Shaylee~

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