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Chapter 6: Reunion

by Lourdes 1 Reviews

Sometimes, when a person wishes long enough, and hard enough, that wish will come true. And sometimes, when that wish comes true... they'll wish it hadn't. (LeexSakura)(NarutoxHinata) (Fixed some...

Category: Naruto - Rating: R - Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Drama, Romance - Characters: Chouji, Gaara, Hinata, Ino, Iruka, Itachi, Jiraiya, Kakashi, Naruto, Neji, Rock Lee, Sakura, Sasuke, Shikamaru, Tenten, Tsunade, Other - Warnings: [!!!] [V] - Published: 2007/02/21 - Updated: 2007/02/22 - 4585 words


  • A Promise to Keep

    (#) Entilzah 2007-02-22 05:29:22 AM

    Ooooo..... Wow! What fun! I would critique, but cannot find anything to improve. So I'll just sit back and really enjoy the ride!

    Author's response

    Man, it is sooo hard to write a good action scene without making it sound overly repetative/descriptive/drawn out/cut off... I could go on.
    My best aid in this area: "Sarin: Kata Tsubasa no Tenshi" (The Advent Children rework of 'One Winged Angel' from Final Fantasy 7.) If you've read my profile you already know my vices. ;)

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