(#) me_myself_and_MCR 2007-02-22Thats right girl! Speak the truth!!! Don't worry about them haters and just keep this piece of art going!! This story is everything but bad and i don't think those 'i think i know it all's' get it. Just keep writing and all those bad ratings will be bosted up into good rating by people who really like your story...(hint hint):).
(#) midlifecrisi 2007-02-22Hey, did any of you ever think that maybe some people have a legitimate beef with the story? You really need an editor (punctation, spelling). Your time line is all over the place (how did husband die falling thru ice in May - see chapt 2) and you are throwing every plot device known to man into the mix. You have real potential but having a public meltdown over some critisism isn't going to help you at all.
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-22ok. i totally agree with you. and i read a legitimate review on this. and this is pretty much a response to that. i understand the argument fully, but the point trying to be made is, why trash her work in that fashion? if you truly have a problem with it, leave CONTRUCTIVE CRITISM. isn't that what this little rating and review box is all about? have no fear Sandee, I think it's wonderful. it's not like we're trying to win any contests..it's all in good fun or whatever right? please, don't allow this to discourage you in any way! :) -kris-
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-22sorry to spam...but i just wanted to clarify to anyone who re-reads this: i wasn't trying to be a snot. i'm still not. it's just tough seeing someone with this much talent being ripped to shreds that way. and no offense to anyone but i've started plenty stories that i couldn't even finish simply because it was just all over the place. not that my shit is all that great, but man, this really disturbs me.
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