Now that Harry has what he wants, what will he do with it? His job, his parents, and his old friends all returning to Hogwarts.
Good start keep up the good work
(#) yojorocks 2007-02-22 06:55:27 PM
Interesting parental interaction; I liked the idea of questioning James' father's fidelity: it was original and well scripted. I am slightly disappointed that you didn't use the passage of time to define Narcissa's character any more, but that's allright.
I am curious as to if Harry is living in the castle or merely teaching there?
Nice chapter overall. Keep up the good work.
The second line of this chapter states that Harry moved from his muggle hotel to Hogwarts, sorry, I didn't think that needed to be stressed much more than that. Thanks for the review. BJH
(#) banner 2007-02-22 08:13:03 PM
I love the way the essential "Harry" shines through. Our hero needs to get down to the Chamber (without setting off any alarms that Dumbledore might have arranged) and verify that the basilisk is actually dead...
Really liked the chapter and it makes me wonder if harry will or did destroy the vanishing cabinet that is in the Room of Requirement. Anyways it isn't like Draco could really do anything to Harry.
(#) darthme1011 2007-02-22 10:22:38 PM
another great chapter
and draco is gonna stir up trouble.....
(#) killerlord 2007-02-23 12:54:55 AM
good fic i like harry narcissa parring ant i hope you wil be updating soon
(#) Monsenhor Tabosa 2007-02-23 02:14:49 AM
Great fic so far, one of the few that hold my atention and make me wait anxiously for updates, so please do soon!!
(#) bumble 2007-02-23 03:30:58 AM
nice update cant wait for the next one to see how the first day off classes go with harry teaching people he used to know and how his relationship with narcissa evolves.please update soon.
"Professor, what were you doing with my mother at ten o'clock today?"
"I dunno, I suspect that I was diddling her, though."
Let's make that 11:15 since the train doesn't leave Kings Cross till 11. BJH
(#) bumble 2007-02-23 04:41:53 AM
great update i liked his introduction to the hogwarts staff. i cant wit to see how you write his first introduction to the students and how his relationship with his parents develope and how his relationship with narcissa evolves so please update soon.
Ah, for some of that you will have to wait for the next chapter. Thanks. BJH