Harry and Co. plan to liberate Belle and his daughter, they get a break and Harry learns of the remaining horcruxes
(#) glazedlookineyes101 2007-02-24 02:03:31 PMLol, I think my favorite part is the back and forth conversation between Harry and Bellatrix. I do not know why but I feel that it is the best part of this chapter, not the planning for Bella's rescue part. Anyway, this is both a nice setup for the bext part and still adds to Harry and Bella's relationship. Good job!
Author's responseThank you, as always for reading and taking the time to review. I've always liked good dialogue in a story; I can forgive all kinds of plot inconsistencies if the dialogue is engaging. Well, that and spelling, if the author won’t even bother to run a spell-check on the story why should I bother to read it? (I do forgive the occasional typo, but I have a five typo limit per story.)
- Great chapter! I really like how Harry and Bella are growing closer. Though, I am curious as to how Harry's friends, especially Neville, are going to react to everything that's happened. Anyways, keep up the excellent work!
Author's responseHopefully Neville will never know, that would be a serious complication, hint, hint. Ask me no questions and I'll post you no spoilers. . .
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-25 06:32:24 AMInteresting set up here. I like the fact that Harry was informed about the horcruxes and there locations. Security through obscurity, eh? It's a pity that you didn't think to add Tom Riddle's award for special service to the school as one. I saw that in a story and that one makes sense. I do hope that you continue to update this one soon. My question is when will Harry collect and take care of the horcruxes? What is going on with Harry's friends? Isn't he expected at the Burrow for Bill and Fleur's wedding? What is happening with Ron and Hermione? You've left alot of questions without including the other two main characters in your story, so far.
Author's responseThank you for reading and taking the time to write a very insightful review. Interesting fact, I did consider using Riddle's award as a horcrux, but I was looking for more mundane objects directly related to the founders, and Riddle had already made one from his own stuff. Harry and company will begin tracking down the remaining horcruxes as soon as Bellatrix and their unborn child are sprung, and not to put too much of a spoiler in here, Bill and Fleur's wedding will be very important to the story. I will update in three days.