Categories > Celebrities > Fall Out Boy > Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
Chapter 2 - You Will Know By The Mark on Their Foreheads...
10 reviewsA brief history and some head banging. HEAD banging. Not Banging, banging. *rolls eyes*
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Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) LOVELA 2007-03-01
Ear lobe fetish! HA HA HA! I seriously burst out laughing. Seriously. Thankfully, I was in the privacy of my own home and not being stared at in a Caribou like I was yesterday when we were actually having that conversation. Stupid people...need to mind their own business. Anyway, on with the review! I love the mystery of this story! I love the characters of this story (esp. Crystal. She always says "that's redic." Yeah, burst out laughing at that too.) I love everything about this story!
SMOOCHES AND POINTS FOR YOU!!!!!Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-03-01
silly. i love it.Author's response
You are silly, I love it too.Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-03-01
Ohh my Mr.Wentz and his 'brilliant' plans. lol. this story makes me smile. update soon, please please . . . please.Author's response
well....seen as you asked three times....I guess i could whip up another chapter....Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) riaryder 2007-03-01
Well, Katy.
Original? Absolutely.
Intriguing? Definitely.
Cutely sweetly funny? Certainly.
Spectacularly well written? You better believe it.
I would like to cuddle your new story, because they always make me feel warm and fuzzy inside.
You = LoveAuthor's response
That's doss like.....Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) duckapple 2007-03-01
Exciting!
Chinchilla?Author's response
Ehh...Chinchilla's are so 1990's....Python?Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-03-02
Your little caustic remarks, I love them... :)
This is original in so many ways, and I can just give on single point. Very frustrating.
Fairfax.Author's response
You can make it up to me in other ways by updating Curls - stat. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxMoving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-03-03
oh no. i think i just found a new favo(u)rite!!
let me say that with the first chapter, i was trying to guess what could have possibly happened and then i realized my brain isn't nearly as fantastical as yours.
you said you weren't sure how good you are at humor. let me assure you right now you are fantabulous, and i laughed out loud at /Crystal, pushed it off with her own fork due to it's distractive nature.
"Sweety, don't be redic!" /(i really do say that. a lot. but i copied it from sarah, so i can't take full credit. but just to note, i really say that. i love you katy.)/she said with a smile.
What ensued, was a fiery debate. Pasta was dangled from utensils, bad structured sentences were, like, totally said, eyeballs were widened. /
patrick recruited for publicity. i think that's great.
i love patrick and petra's interaction at the end of the second chapter. i love that it's awkward for them because it creates humor.
all in all, you hit a home run with this one. i'm in love.
oh, and this is the first story (besides "Saving the world") that i actually cameo in. how bad-a is that?
at the risk of sounding incredibly repetitive, i love you.Author's response
I missed these reviews, but not half as much as I miss you and your ways. I mean that. :( (hearts)Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) luckysgc921 2007-03-16
...wow. update! like right now. taps foot
...i'm waiting miss katy.
That was amazingly giggle & swoon worthy all at once. Doubled by the recent rock sound article where cupcake's all like "i wanna be a husband. I wanna be a dad"
update? pretty please with a cherry on top?Moving In, Moving Up, Moving On
(#) halleluiakid 2007-03-20
Patrick stared at his friend, his face similar to that of a patient before they flat line."
im so going to hell,i laughed @ that!
--Author's response
I kinda hated that line but it was something we could imagine...your dark sense of humour is mirrored in most of us here at FicWad....xxx
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