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Seizure

by thebroken 4 Reviews

Pete is in the hospital and Peyton descovers she still has feelings for him.

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2007/03/03 - Updated: 2007/03/04 - 1427 words

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  • Everybody is looking for Belief

    (#) danceislife 2007-03-03 05:10:23 PM

    good story, but a lot of typos. The very first chapter had some point of view errors as well. I could make out what they were though. If you want anyone to read your stuff before you post it for proof reading, I'm willing to help you out! love the story line though...

    Author's response

    thank you. I'm from sweden and not very used to write in english and I always do a lot of mistakes when I write on the computer. If you want to help me it would be great.
  • Everybody is looking for Belief

    (#) danceislife 2007-03-03 11:34:21 PM

    really? I never would have guessed, I just figured that it was shitty MS Word screwing up on you. I know that happens to me a lot. Well, now that I know that, I praise you on what you have so far! The English language is messed up too. Other languages are MUCH easier..

    Author's response

    Word is mean. I think English is easy if you compare it to french. My nightmare, I hate it. And I suck at it.
  • Everybody is looking for Belief

    (#) MCRANDFOBLover 2007-04-01 04:00:09 AM

    Din lilla jävel! >.< JAG VILL VETA VAD SOM HÄNDE JUUE!! UPDATERA OCH DET SNABBT!! Annars får du inte dela kista med mig och Frankie!!

    (Too lazy to write it in english..^^)

    Author's response

    haha, jag har två kapitel halv skrivna men vet inte vilken jag ska välja att jobba på. Det du som inte får dela kista med Frankie och mig när du säger så :P X)

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