CloTi one-shot. Post AC. There are three words in 'I love you' and he can't get past the first.
- The freestyle format fits well with the concept but it's hard to read at points. The sections that I thought flowed most naturally were those that had each new fragment as a new line.
Overall, it's a nice look at a piece of Cloud's character that is often glossed over.
Author's responseThanks for the crit! It's much appreciated. I'll go back over it with that in mind.