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there are three words in 'i love you'

by GalaxiaAlpha 2 Reviews

CloTi one-shot. Post AC. There are three words in 'I love you' and he can't get past the first.

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters: Cloud Strife, Tifa Lockhart - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/03/03 - Updated: 2007/03/04 - 867 words - Complete

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  • there are three words in 'i love you'

    (#) arydyss 2007-03-04 01:34:06 PM

    The freestyle format fits well with the concept but it's hard to read at points. The sections that I thought flowed most naturally were those that had each new fragment as a new line.
    Overall, it's a nice look at a piece of Cloud's character that is often glossed over.

    Author's response

    Thanks for the crit! It's much appreciated. I'll go back over it with that in mind.
  • there are three words in 'i love you'

    (#) Faeriegirl 2007-05-11 12:15:47 PM

    AWWWW I loved it. But Clouds hair cries but still, it was sooo sweet!

    "Hi, I'm Cloud Strife"
    "And I need to shop for new clothes"
    "And I love you"

    Love it :)

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