(#) Phoenix_Master 2008-01-09Has this really gotten no reviews? I personally found this very moving, you definately have a way with words; it exposes the slower ageing in Saiyans for the curse it really is. It might be fun to have unlimited power and strength for endless decades, but when everyone you ever knew and loved starts dropping dead around you, it's not so 'cool' anymore. A very well-writeen piece. I highly encourage you to continue with your writing endeavours, you are a very skilled individual. Favourited.
(#) DarkDragonDreamer 2011-07-05I really enjoed this... so sad and moving...
I loved the way you wrote this and expect great things to come from you!
This is obviously the first story I have read by you, but if you have more it will not be the last!!
This made me sit back and think... and almost cry...
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