What is the plan? Read to find out!
(#) twiinklestar 2007-03-07 06:58:31 PMi think this is a very good story and it is very interesting too. i love the jayxtheresa stuff and archie's jealousy but there is a bit of bad grammar in this story. there are also some words that are not real words. please keep up the good work and try a bit harder on the english part of the story.
Author's responseThanks . I'll try harder.