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From one World to Another
1 ReviewsIs death really the end? In loving memory of Vent.
You're gone now.
The hourglass is empty.
Your soul blown away.
By the fierce hurricane of death.
It storms and storms
But no umbrella blocks the rain.
My heart is empty.
My life is in a daze.
I'm blinded by the shadows who comfort me.
Them not seeing my pain.
Only I remeber the imprint you made.
Forever you shall live
In my heart.
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It's a rough draft right now and still needs some work. Maybe it's not so good because I'm in a very down state of mood. r&r. Constructive critism very welcome. First poem on fic-wad.
The hourglass is empty.
Your soul blown away.
By the fierce hurricane of death.
It storms and storms
But no umbrella blocks the rain.
My heart is empty.
My life is in a daze.
I'm blinded by the shadows who comfort me.
Them not seeing my pain.
Only I remeber the imprint you made.
Forever you shall live
In my heart.
**********************
It's a rough draft right now and still needs some work. Maybe it's not so good because I'm in a very down state of mood. r&r. Constructive critism very welcome. First poem on fic-wad.
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